Of course I posted my comment in the wrong place. *eyeball roll at self* Anyway...here it is again....
read this in one sitting. It is now 11:48pm and getting up for work tomorrow is gonna be a bitch but it was so worth it. I just couldn't stop reading this. The suspense and the world you created. I really enjoyed this so much. I'd love to know what happened with Leila & Eber and whether they do eventually find their boys. I was a little confused about monte's wife & daughter. where were they? why could he see them but not really? please excuse me if you explained this and I just didn't get it. I'm not normally a science fiction kind of gal but the way you wrote this really brought me into this world.
I woke up this morning thinking about your story! And being the shallow person I am I'd also like to add that if you do decide to add more .... tommy teaching adam all about the joys of having a body and the sense of touch would be pretty awesome. just sayin. :)
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read this in one sitting. It is now 11:48pm and getting up for work tomorrow is gonna be a bitch but it was so worth it. I just couldn't stop reading this. The suspense and the world you created. I really enjoyed this so much. I'd love to know what happened with Leila & Eber and whether they do eventually find their boys. I was a little confused about monte's wife & daughter. where were they? why could he see them but not really? please excuse me if you explained this and I just didn't get it. I'm not normally a science fiction kind of gal but the way you wrote this really brought me into this world.
I woke up this morning thinking about your story! And being the shallow person I am I'd also like to add that if you do decide to add more .... tommy teaching adam all about the joys of having a body and the sense of touch would be pretty awesome. just sayin. :)